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I'd blow up the world for you by ~MoonbeamEuly:iconMoonbeamEuly:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Romantic > Mature Romance > Haiku & Eastern


For you I would blow
up the entire world; Indeed
it's all I dream of.

Sparks burning so bright,
magic wishes glittering;
engulfing the dark.

Reflected in your
eye lies all I destroyed;
I loved it so,

I loved you so;
Catalyst to my entire
exploded universe.

Fireworks collapse;
endless cascades around
us. We are alive

And God oh God oh
nothing ever felt better
than our blown up life.

Churning myths take over
now lie down here safe with me;
talk of stars above...

Minutes to Midnight
and the sparks lull you to sleep;
shut tired eyes.

Just sleep on, please do;
through dragons and unicorns,
shining fantasies

Just dream on, please do;
I'll blow up the world for you
the damn world for you.
©2009-2010 ~MoonbeamEuly
:iconmoonbeameuly:

Author's Comments

First ever Haiku!

...so probably full of mistakes, feel free to point them out : )

Always was rubbish at syllable counting.

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Mood: Optimism ~a-love-4-a-life Jul 13, 2009, 9:29:49 PM
that's really good it's funny i'm re-reading the twilight series so this all kinda ties in and it was freaky i didn't even look for compassriosons! lol any way it's great i couldn't tell it was a haiku either i always haf trouble writieng them they turned out choppy but you did great and the message realls tells how somecouples feel and it's sweet two thumps up!

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In my world no one hates and everyone loves, everyone's happy and there is no limit to the opportunities people get.
Come live in my world.
:iconmoonbeameuly:
~MoonbeamEuly Jul 15, 2009, 10:43:27 AM
Ah, I love Twilight! Can't beat good ol' love stories, and thank you so so much for the lovely comment and fav! This one means particularly a lot to me. :heart:

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Be An Impact.
:icona-love-4-a-life:
~a-love-4-a-life Jul 16, 2009, 9:48:01 PM
me too and no problemi like tosave things i like on here and post them on my walls for inspriation so i have no problem faving anything i think is good which seems to be alot with your work

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In my world no one hates and everyone loves, everyone's happy and there is no limit to the opportunities people get.
Come live in my world.
:iconmoonbeameuly:
~MoonbeamEuly Jul 18, 2009, 8:22:14 AM
Awh thank you so much :heart:

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Be An Impact.
:icona-love-4-a-life:
~a-love-4-a-life Jul 18, 2009, 11:47:07 AM
no problem, i think it's an awesome concept.

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In my world no one hates and everyone loves, everyone's happy and there is no limit to the opportunities people get.
Come live in my world.
:iconagentaragorn:
=AgentAragorn Jul 7, 2009, 8:45:38 PM
Minutes to Midnight lol slight LP refrence? xD

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Able to lay paw in the shadow but still see ones reflection in the light of the moon
:iconmoonbeameuly:
~MoonbeamEuly Jul 8, 2009, 11:15:07 AM
lol... what's LP?

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Be An Impact.
:iconagentaragorn:
=AgentAragorn Jul 8, 2009, 10:21:45 PM
Linkin Park

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Able to lay paw in the shadow but still see ones reflection in the light of the moon
:iconmoonbeameuly:
~MoonbeamEuly Jul 9, 2009, 8:11:18 AM
oh... I do love them, but don't remember Minutes to Midnight?
maybe sub consciously lol

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Be An Impact.
:iconagentaragorn:
=AgentAragorn Jul 9, 2009, 12:10:22 PM
that was the name of their latest album D:!

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Able to lay paw in the shadow but still see ones reflection in the light of the moon
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